难驯的千爪鱼
把三轮货车推下坑
自己却
懒洋洋地
躺
__在 _______车
____三___货___上。
______轮
汗水掺杂着铁锈，
在上海车道中央
驭兽不遂的
是你古铜色的身躯。
汽车苍蝇
狠毒至极挥之不去
萦绕在
你的躯体上。
视若无睹狼心狗肺
是你的同志；
力不从心却帮你驯兽的
是一头金发
和一只
颤抖的细手。
出了坑的千爪鱼千金
依旧刁蛮
你吃力地踩着三轮货车
一寸_____地蠕动着。
____一寸
静安国际广场的灯火已在闪烁
你的古铜色 －－－
却消失在
我背后的黑暗中。
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wow dear jie your Chinese power has not diminished any bit all these years - never failed to impress me! Looking forward to another literal masterpiece!
ReplyDelete*blush* Thanks meimei :) I mulled over this one for a while because I was very affected by the incident and wanted to convey it well. But it still doesn't end up the way I want it - the rhythm is a bit jerky - but oh well... It'll just have to go through revisions as I mull over it more!
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